特级教师教你写作文：5年级课堂作文

　　本书针对5年级小学生的写作特点，选取教材中的写作主题，通过分步审题、精选素材、巧列提纲、范文引路来手把手指导学生学习写作技巧，并配以同类佳作范文，设置旁批点评，总结佳作亮点。

　　王大绩，是全国著名语文特级教师，中国自主招生网名师专家，长期从事高三教学、教研工作，十多年来一直参加北京市高考阅卷，并在阅卷领导小组负责《阅卷纵横》的编纂。悉心研究教学与高考规律，洞察各地高考试题走向。

◎分步来审题................................4

◎精心细选材................................5

◎名师手把手................................6如何写我和书的故事............... 6

◎作文列提纲................................8

◎范文来引路................................8窃读记....................................... 8

◎佳作大展台.............................. 10爱读书的我............................. 10书籍，我永远的精神伴侣....... 11我与书的故事......................... 13与书为友................................. 15我和书的故事......................... 16

我爱读书................................. 18

◎分步来审题.............................. 20

◎精心细选材.............................. 20

◎名师手把手.............................. 21如何记一次辩论..................... 21

◎作文列提纲.............................. 22

◎范文来引路.............................. 23记一次精彩的辩论会............. 23

◎佳作大展台.............................. 24记一次辩论赛......................... 24“开卷是否有益”辩论会....... 27记一次“读书辩论会”.......... 29别开生面的辩论会................. 31

◎分步来审题.............................. 33

◎精心细选材.............................. 34

◎名师手把手.............................. 35如何写生活中的启发............. 35

◎作文列提纲.............................. 36

◎范文来引路.............................. 37爬竿的启示............................. 37

◎佳作大展台.............................. 38游泳的启示............................. 38传话游戏................................. 40我得到了启示......................... 41名言的启示............................. 42文明—只差一步................. 44文明，只差一步..................... 45还是祖国好............................. 47

◎分步来审题.............................. 49

◎精心细选材.............................. 49

◎名师手把手.............................. 50如何写父母的爱..................... 50

◎作文列提纲.............................. 52

◎范文来引路.............................. 52我爱你，妈妈......................... 52

◎佳作大展台.............................. 54妈妈的红烧肉......................... 54读懂父爱................................. 56妈妈的爱................................. 58

爸爸，我想对您说................. 60妈妈，听我说说心里话.......... 62

◎分步来审题.............................. 64

◎精心细选材.............................. 64

◎名师手把手.............................. 65如何描写场景......................... 65

◎作文列提纲.............................. 66

◎范文来引路.............................. 67精彩的冬季田运会................. 67

◎佳作大展台.............................. 68一次拔河比赛......................... 68比赛场上................................. 70舞龙......................................... 71升旗仪式................................. 72放爆竹..................................... 73拔河比赛................................. 74

◎分步来审题.............................. 75

◎精心细选材.............................. 76

◎名师手把手.............................. 77如何写童年趣事..................... 77

◎作文列提纲.............................. 79

◎范文来引路.............................. 79童年趣事................................. 79

◎佳作大展台.............................. 81童年“模特秀”..................... 81蚂蚁当上了搬运工................. 83

童年趣事................................. 84童年趣事................................. 85童年趣事................................. 87童年趣事................................. 88

◎分步来审题.............................. 90

◎精心细选材.............................. 90

◎名师手把手.............................. 91如何写一件令你感动的事....... 91

◎作文列提纲.............................. 92

◎范文来引路.............................. 93让我感动的一件事................. 93

◎佳作大展台.............................. 94感动......................................... 94母亲节的故事......................... 96在伸手之间............................. 97圣诞节的感动......................... 99

永存心底的那份感动............101一件感动的事........................102

家庭生活◎佳作大展台.............................105“三国鼎立”........................105这叫品位................................106

校园记事◎佳作大展台.............................109侦探日记................................109难忘的跳绳比赛....................110吃核桃....................................111

社会见闻◎佳作大展台.............................113那件小事温暖着我................113买彩票....................................115

◎作文列提纲.............................123

◎范文来引路.............................124吹牛高手................................124

◎佳作大展台.............................125我家的“权威”....................125美名远扬的“养鸡大王”.......127执着追求的哥哥....................129我的老师像一本书................130我的“辣”老师....................132五（3）班的“天才”...........134风云多变的她........................135

家庭人物◎佳作大展台.............................138“怪人”老爸........................138“老糊涂”爷爷....................139舅舅是个网迷........................141

校园人物◎佳作大展台.............................143“憨豆”老任........................143我们眼中的“怪”老师.........145

社会人物◎佳作大展台.............................145修车的老爷爷........................147卖豆腐的小姑娘....................148

四季风光◎佳作大展台.............................153美丽的冬天............................153春雨........................................155

秋天的雨................................156

美丽山河◎佳作大展台.............................158东海夜色................................158醉美云水谣............................159热闹的小池塘........................160

◎分步来审题.............................164

◎精心细选材.............................165

◎名师手把手.............................165

如何给远方的小朋友写一封 信........................................165 

◎作文列提纲.............................167

◎范文来引路.............................168给远方小朋友的一封信.........168

◎佳作大展台.............................170给远方小伙伴的一封信.........170给远方小伙伴的一封信.........171给吉伍么日扎的一封信.........173给远方朋友的一封信............175给远方朋友的一封信............177给远方朋友的一封信............179

◎分步来审题.............................181

◎精心细选材.............................181

◎名师手把手.............................182

如何写读后感........................182

◎作文列提纲.............................184

◎范文来引路.............................184愤怒与惋惜............................184

◎佳作大展台.............................185读《圆明园的毁灭》有感........185《狼牙山五壮士》读后感........187伟大的父爱............................188《钢铁是怎样炼成的》读后

 感........................................190

读《狼王梦》有感................191

读《小学生必背古诗词80 首》  有感....................................193

◎分步来审题.............................195

◎精心细选材.............................195

◎名师手把手.............................196如何写发言稿........................196

◎作文列提纲.............................197

◎范文来引路.............................198请投我一票............................198

◎佳作大展台.............................199竞选班长的发言稿................199相信我，就投我一票............201竞选文艺委员........................202家长会上的发言稿................204获奖感言................................206主题班会上的发言稿............207

◎分步来审题.............................209

◎精心细选材.............................209

◎名师手把手.............................211如何写作品的梗概................211

◎作文列提纲.............................212

◎范文来引路.............................212《开国大典》梗概................212

◎佳作大展台.............................213《三国演义》故事梗概.........213《木笛》梗概........................214

《小公主》梗概....................215 《哈利·波特与魔法石》  梗概....................................216 

◎分步来审题.............................217

◎精心细选材.............................218

◎名师手把手.............................218如何缩写课文........................218

◎作文列提纲.............................219

◎范文来引路.............................219《草船借箭》缩写................219

◎佳作大展台.............................220《金色的鱼钩》缩写............220《草船借箭》缩写................222《将相和》缩写....................223《景阳冈》缩写....................224《小英雄雨来》缩写............225

◎精心细选材.............................231

◎名师手把手.............................232

◎分步来审题.............................230 如何看图写足球比赛............232

◎作文列提纲.............................233

◎范文来引路.............................233小足球赛................................233

◎佳作大展台.............................235小小足球赛............................235

小足球赛................................237精彩的小足球赛....................238小足球赛................................240激烈的足球比赛....................241小足球赛................................243

◎分步来审题.............................248

◎精心细选材.............................249

◎名师手把手.............................251如何介绍一种物品................251

◎作文列提纲.............................253

◎范文来引路.............................253“森林之王”........................253

◎佳作大展台.............................254猕猴桃的自述........................254西瓜........................................256我的文具盒............................257我家的电饭锅........................259我的“小丑击鼓”................260墨砚........................................261

动物世界◎佳作大展台.............................263我的小宠物............................263我家的破坏狂........................265

植物天地◎佳作大展台.............................267水果之王——榴莲................267红掌........................................268薰衣草的自述........................269

器具用品◎佳作大展台.............................271我的书包................................271课桌的自述............................272

◎分步来审题.............................276

◎精心细选材.............................277

◎名师手把手.............................278如何写二十年后回故乡.........278

◎作文列提纲.............................279

◎范文来引路.............................280二十年后回故乡....................280

◎佳作大展台.............................281二十年后回母校....................281二十年后见亲人....................283二十年后回家乡....................285

二十年后回农村....................286二十年后回故乡....................288二十年后回故乡....................290

未来世界◎佳作大展台.............................292未来的雨................................292与未来通话记........................294

奇思妙想◎佳作大展台............................297我是风....................................297假如我是蜘蛛侠....................298